looked nice on paper, but it sucks as a font. i tried making it thicker but certain parts ran into each other and it looked crappy. help needed, wanted, appriciated.
-phillip
I like this font...at first glance, I thought that it had
graf stylings, but looking at it a little longer, I'm
seeing a Whimsy-like face with some character.
It looks like your original intention (and the source
of your frustration) was to have nice, smooth curves.
But to me it looks like the letters are a little
choppy/chunky...and that's a good thing. It has
a very hand drawn look.
From what I see here, my suggestion would be to
even out the size & weight of the characters.
The "e" seems a little small in relation to the other
characters. But on the other hand, I think that
variation adds to the hand drawn feeling. The stem
of the "m" also looks a little heavy in relation to the
rest of the lines...
I say keep it up and post more examples!
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