It's a very nice start. The letters that stand out to me as far as needing improvement are the "x" and "v". The x is too fussy and the v is not strong enough in form (too "u" like).

Also, overall, you may want to incorporate more of the original lettering's weight modulation and curves.

Otherwise, looks cool. It's a lot more elegant than some imitation chinese/japanese fonts that try too hard to look like their ancestors.

Thanks Matthew, I feel the same way about the x. I'll take your advice on the v, weight modulation and curves.

I'm also thinking of adding some extra strokes to the letters, so as to make it feel more like chinese.

Thanks again! (in mandarin thats Sie-sie ni) =)