The emphasis and excitement is in the "group"

It is obvious that the emphasis nees to be shifted to "Ben Barnes".

Also you have chosen a tough group of letters to kern cleanly

All caps followed by all lowercase? Doesn't quite work. Have you tried to stack em'? Might be more usable this way.
Weights need a bit of work. BEN BARNES should be a bit heavier. BBG with secondary line of text "ben barnes group"
might be worth trying as well.
I agree with the comment by Daniel about the ARN kerning issues.
LC p is beautiful.

All caps followed by all lowercase? Doesn't quite work. Have you tried to stack em'? Might be more usable this way.
Weights need a bit of work. BEN BARNES should be a bit heavier. BBG with secondary line of text "ben barnes group"
might be worth trying as well.
I agree with the comment by Daniel about the ARN kerning issues.
LC p is beautiful.