This is my first attempt at designing a typeface from the ground
up, any and all comments are appreciated. Be brutal -- I want
to learn!

I wasn't entirely sure whether to post this here or in the display
section, since I only really intended it to be used in large sizes.
A couple of people have told me they like it in smaller sizes, but
I think it's too heavy. I may make a lighter (and better spaced
for text) weight if this one turns out OK.

Thanks in advance,

Jordan