I just thought I'd post this draft for typographical criticism.
The logo is for an aromatherapy device. The client wants a techy, contemporate wordmark.
All letters are hand-drawn. Please forgive the Handel-like "e".
Paul
I was pleasantly suprised, when I recieved an e-mail describing the Logo as needing to be a 'techy, contemporate wordmark', I immediately thought that this person had gone for the obvious. Like I say I was pleasantly suprised, I agree that the E doesn't feel right to me and the placement of the 'cells' looks odd... haven't got time to do too much so it's easier just to show a a quick suggestion 
Paul:
I think the general direction works, however, I'm feeling Hrant's remarks. If you continue in the direction you're heading I would have two possible suggestions: (1) extend the "E" horizontally, as it appears too small relative to the other letter forms, and (2) increase the serifs of "x" to be slightly larger than that of the "y" (or just lose the "y" serifs), as the "y" appears gargantuan compared to the other letterforms. If you decide to move a little further, you may try softening the serifs so there are less hard angles (again, maybe losing the "y" serifs). One more thought
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