Well, this is my first attempt here, although i've just been looking for a while. This forum seems fantastic. The range of knowlege really surprised me.
I'm just getting into typography. I design as a hobby, so I don't have a large collection of fonts. I'm designing with free fonts and prepackaged stuff, which is sad, considering how many beautiful faces I've seen on this forum alone.
Anyway, I could use a critique for this logo:
It is set in a free font called Forgotten Futurist. Really, I've only designed by sight until now, but I'd like to learn how to do it right. Any critiques would help, and I have an extremely thick skin.





