Typophile

Critique of Logo

susancita25

Hi everyone,
I would like a feedback on this Logo I have done. The products are stuffed animals for kids that are going to be sold in a zoo. I would appreciate if someone have any other ideas on color, shape, etc.

Thanks a lot!
Susan

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Okay I love anything with VAG Rounded in it. Umm... I would shove 'happy' over to the right of 'zoo' and I'd be extra careful that the all the colors are of equal saturation... the colors are a dad dull on my CRT.

Anyhow... excellent visual pun and it high in cuteness factor!

Mike Diaz

maybe you could add more brightness to the colours by dropping the black outline? i don't think it's necessary on 'zoo' and the "mouth".

Thanks everyone for the comments, I will try your suggestions and see if they work.

Thanks again very much!!
Susan

Pallette made me think McDonalds probably the red and proportions of the frame. Does the Z have to be uppercase? Happy seems out of proportion to zoo, I would look at increasing the size.
Tim

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