harsh criticism needed — Typophile archive

elena gjorgjieva1 May 2006 · 18:40

HI,
I'm doing a font for Type 1 class. The idea was to get a hand-rendered feel, but with a cleaner look. Also I wanted to retian some 'old-style' elements suck as tick-thin difference on stems and some curvy tails.I'm having some problems with the S,X,Y, and Z.
Much feedback would be appreciated.
Thanks,
Elena

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fontplayer1 May 2006 · 19:27

The darkening scribbles are not even through the letters. Starting the scribble later like you did with the A might make the H and others look more uniform and thus cleaner, imo.