Hi,
I don't know if this is the appropriate forum for this type of critique, but I am posting some packaging options for a Gourmet coffee. It is very high-end, from Puerto Rico (Map). The name Platino means Platinum.
My problem with these designs aren't with the look as much as how they will stack up against other Gourmet Coffees. Did you get competing brands and see what they were doing? Did you do shelf space testing? Will your brand jump out to consumers or will it fade into the background when its in a commercial enviroment? I will suggest the name is to subtitle and needs to be bumped up (size) and you might want to make some of the important information with more contrast. My suggestions have nothing to do with design but with sales.
With limited knowledge of your market and its competitors I can only speak to the packages presented and my knowledge of the NZ coffee market. #1 seems to work best of the four options due to its simplicity and restraint. The limited colour palate assists with the idea that the name portraits (platinum) by allowing so much use of this silver packaging base layer. Move the bean cluster up slightly so that it does not cramp the blend bar so much. The brand mark needs more dominance, the 100% logo needs less.
The burgundy bar and yellow screen of #2 seems to restrict the map too much and fails to let it breathe and use the space like it does in #1.
#4 is far too cluttered and this complex grid offers little to the idea of sophistication or high end.
#3 has potential but lacks some of the sophistication and clean lines of #1.
Best.
-nic
Thanks to all. The feedback is greatly appreciated.
Dan, in the beginning the coffee will be sold locally and there is no packaging like this on the Island. No tests have been done at the international level, however due to the fact that Puerto Rico has to import coffee to supply the local demand, international retail sales are not the main objective.
Chris, I found two online retailers http://www.demiislita.com/cafe_us.html and http://www.ebay.com... look for Encantos.
Thanks again.
Edgardo
Number 1 is really nice, the bean cluster really disrupts the background image though, I'd consider moving it or removing it all together. Also the logo seems too cramped vertically, let it breathe a bit and add increase the height of the black box. I'm not sure what the top insignia is; but one thing to consider is that once the package is open and the customer rolls it down that will most likely be lost in the fold; so if it's important even moving it down 1/2 an inch might be worth it.
I can see where the color for the map in #2 came from and I like it as well. Again the logo should have a bit more room and the 100% is tight to the bottom, I'd move it up a tad.
Cheers!
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