Odd colors. Hierarchy is not as it should be. That spacing between charles and askew is too big. Why do you start with a more formal approach? Then abstract it from there.
This is my first posting here and I am quite anxious to get involved with the community! Our instructor directed us here and I’ve actually gathered a great deal of information just reading in the forums.
I’ve definitely moved a to a more confident feeling of my own designs, and I wanted to get some critique on my own personal logo that I will be using for my own freelance work.
This is the first work I’ve actually posted beyond the critique outside my own peers and instructors, and I am definitely looking forward to getting some feedback on it.
Thanks!
Charles
