Typophile

Business card

This card is a friends card. They designed it. Just wanted a critique on it.
More personal card than business card.
Thanks

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I'm not sure I follow the flow, probably because there really isn't one .. also, the graphic while very .. um, interesting .. I feel is a bit too submissive for the motto .. which I believe translates to "either conquer or die" ..

Just my two cents ..

-fQ-

Is it Roman (romulus & remus), Greek (the quote), or 1900s American (Copperplate)?
Bullet points too large, and the phone number should line up with something rather than just centering it.

Captured from commoncrawl.org on 19 Apr 2015. original URL