The ornament seems ambiguous to me, it could be half an orange, a moon, etc. The weight of the strokes could also be a problem, they seem too varied to work with the text at twelve point, I also think that the execution of the clock face needs to be refined.
I think you should investigate other methods to represent time, maybe with a less three dimensional appearance, hourglasses (there is one in Hoefler Ornaments) and sundials come to mind or a more conventional representation of a clock face. Hoefler Ornaments contain traditional items and styles, hedera – the ivy and plant-based ones, the printer's fist – pointing hand, sun and moon and fleur de lys.
Tim
I am currently working on designing a book of poetry and photographs. The author and I have been discussing using a small illustration or ornament to mark the end of each poem and we would like it to reflect the central theme of the work: time. The text will be set in Hoefler Text, so I'd like the illustration to work well in conjunction with this typeface. I've attached two PDF's (page view and detail) of my idea and would appreciate your comments/suggestions. I'm not a type designer, so I feel like I'm a bit over my head on this one...
In addition to any comments on this particular ornament I'm designing, I would love to hear more about how (or even why!) type designers go about designing ornaments for their typefaces? I've had a look at some of the Hoefler Text ornaments, but I don't really understand their unifying characteristics. Is there anything in particular that I should be looking out for?
Cheers,
Scott
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