Nobody? :(

try setting a few words for us so we can see how things interact...

I'll do that at work on Wed. I don't have the file at home with me. Thanks though for at least that. :)

Here's a link to another PDF...a few random words...I didn't really know what to set. The y in my name is temporary, but those are two caps I'm working with.

http://users.adelphia.net/~dabailey/modern.blackletter.pdf

I like the slant of the strokes, but the consistent width of the strokes makes it feel like it was drawn with a marker and pushes it more towards being a graffiti style than blackletter. I'd play with varying the stroke widths a little bit and see what you get. The real artistry of the 20th century blackletters was in how many curves they were able to cram into each glyph.

The other direction to go would be to explore ideas like American Text or Gothic Gothic and straighten things out and see if you can get some interesting effects from straight lines and harder angles.

It's interesting! Keep working with it!

Only one comment for now. To me the f would have better look if you try something else for his head. May be work with the bottom of the terminal g.

I agree about the graffiti comment-- it makes me think of 1970's New York subway cars more than new speed-metal bands. That said, I wonder if actually reducing the vertical curvature would help stabilize it a bit; right now, it dances so much that it starts to look a bit chaotic. And notice the lower-case i and l -- I'd think either they need the same angle if you want a more traditional, stable face; otherwise, you'd want to exaggerate the difference there and in a lot of other places.