I've been developing a new sans serif/display typeface for a concert poster design, a super geometric typeface design to complement Avenir or Avant Garde in uppercase, that I would like to call Britannica. I was just looking for some suggestions for ways I could give it more of a personality to the letterforms. This is my first formal typeface, and I haven't done lowercase yet, but I was looking for some creative imput. Thanks...
poster.pdf
First look I'd say, this typeface seems to have potential. At my point of view, I'suggested to raise the middle bar of th E, F, H, B, The K looks like it's an arrow hurting a vertical line and this arrow is too in the middle. The Z is too wide and the G too narrow compare to the C and the O. The diagonale line of the S seems to low.
The Q is right on.
Alex, are you still working on this?
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