I like it a lot. The only change I’d recommend is making the ‘i’ just a hint shorter, bring the legs of the ‘n’ up a hint, and do the same with the ‘l’. The bowls of letters such as ‘o’, ‘g’, and ‘n’ should be slightly above/below the baseline and x-height to compensate for the visual trick of the eye caused by their form. Otherwise, it’ll look like the circular forms aren’t aligning properly with the x-height and baseline, and appear too small. It’s very subtle, because you have so many circular forms. I notice it most on the ‘i’.

You will run into trouble if this logo has to be faxed. ‘dgn.’ may drop out entirely. You may want to come up with a design that accounts for the essentially 100% black-only conditions of a fax machine.

Again, other than that, I think it’s great.

Thanks crugen!

I have come up with an all black version. I revised this quite a bit.. at first I used an outline stroke, but the client was unsatisfied. I finished the job wit a .5 stroke at about a 35 degree angle.. im going to upload this so you can take a look.

Thanks for the response! I’m going to try and make these type adjustments you suggested!

consider adding an “s” to “dgn.” Right now I read it as “igloo-diggin” and I think others might too, confusing your client’s potential customers.

The thing is, I made this lettering and an S would be very difficult for me to maek. I might give it a try! Thanks!