Some thoughts: The spacing in Fraktal is bad in all versions. The biggest crime is the KTA, you could drive a truck through those spaces. In #2 I don't like the forced justification of the word design, its just not balanced. In #3 why not bleed the F from the left hand side of the box and the L from the righthand side of the box. Also try loosing the word design all together and make it part of a tagline that describes the kind of design business you are creating. In #4 The mark almost becomes an S. Number 6 is just a forced design. I think you have a good start keep going!