Hi David! I really like the mc monogram. One thing you could try on that is using a heaver "c".

The horizontal rule and type alignment, however, are unbalanced. You might be better off eliminating the line and center-aligning "Michael Contardo" with the monogram. A smaller point size might help the balance, too.

Paul

I'm not sure that dropping the right leg of the "M" is adding anything to the logo. I guess it is a bit distracting to me. I agree that the monogram is nice.

mb

To me, that extended leg on the M gives it character. It's a conservative logo, but it has just a dash of playfulness in it.

First and Foremost:

what do you mean by "from what i know, he is an older......" ?


you don't know your client?




David Hamuel

David,
I am a designer at an agency who was handed this project. It is just the way things work here

Here are some revisions and color choices. I used a heavier weight c in the monogram and played around with the shape a bit. I like the top left one, but my main concern is that it

sorry for the double post

Hi David,

I like the one on the right hand side second from the bottom (with the hairline around the ochre circle -- BTW ochre may not be the best color choice since he's a whitening specialist :-).

Two thoughts.
1) Try his name smaller 80-90%
2) Give

The Logo is a bit generic. Although I don't think that a logo necessariyl has to say anything about the client, maybe there is a way of showing what he doesn without the old teethe&brush clich

i dont' believe anything you say, HD

Of course referring to HD's animated gificon, which reads:

"DON'T BELIEVE ANYTHING I SAY"

This is looking very good, David. I really like the top two on the right. Experiment with some more colours - even an unusual colour like maroon or taupe might look nice.

Paul

Here's some more revisions and color choices. I changed the proportions between the name and the monogram and i think it worked nicely. Again, thanks for the great feedback.

I thought maybe HD's

I've been following this critique, but I haven't had time to offer any input until now.

RE: Color

I appreciate the simplicity of your design. I do like these new colors as well. My only comment -- and don't mind be proved wrong -- is that I read "mc" as in a last name McCahalan or something like that. I think it is because the 'c' appears smaller than the 'm'.

Tiffany, you're right. It's a nice mark, but it does read as Mc.

Also, the latest color palette is great. Fresh without being
too minty.