Perhaps this post should have been in Critique / Display.

Nicer than OCR-A :-)

And, yes, if you're still working on it and would like some input, the Critique section is the right place.

Thanks Riccardo, can I (or someone else) move the post or should I just repost it?

You will need to repost: http://typophile.com/node/96238

Ok, thanks!

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Great..