My first sans serif font – some feedback? :)

FernandoMarco3 May 2014

This is my first sans serif font. I actually send it for the insentive program of TypeTogether but my project wasn't choosed :(
After that, I think some feedback can help me to catch the problems i didn't see before.
Thany you all! :D

Link on behance: https://www.behance.net/gallery/16049109/Gro-Typeface-soon-

bojev3 May 2014#

Nice effort - I like the way it looks for text setting. Might be a bit too much like Avenir. Still a nice sans, but it could use something to make it stand out from the crowd.

hrant3 May 2014#

The reason they declined to take this on might be because it's too "predictable". But it's not easy to make something surprising without resorting to gimmicks...

hhp

eliason3 May 2014#

Increased letterspacing and smaller wordspaces would help this.

anila3112 May 2014#

I really like your creation. Very good job.

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