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Logo Help (follow up)

Tannathan

Hi guys, this is a follow up post to the previous one. I have made changes based on suggestions received. A. and B. were the old logos. C. and D. are new with more legible company's name. My company will be selling fashion accessories, mostly scarves. Targeting women between 28-35. Moderate discretionary income. Let me know what you guys think.

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Hi Tannathan! I think you made the right choice by including your name in the logotype. A logo's most important quality is that is has to be legible, and your first logo you showed us acted more as an abstract logomark. I would suggest making the logotype larger since the type is always more important than the mark for communication unless you're a major brand like McDonalds or Starbucks. I think the mark would look nice if it was 1/3 to 1/2 the size of the type.

Thank you tofu co. I will play around with it some more. Also, I just got some suggestions on the font for the logo type. Time to play ^_^

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