Typophile

Feedback on a script 'y'

MrT

I'd like any opinions please on the y character in the above image.
I've highlighted the area of (my) concern – I'm reasonably happy with it but also very close to it.
I'd like to keep the line a single weight to support the idea of the bomb's fuse.

Thank you...

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