I think the "z" is too wide and the "q" should back slant like the rest.
I really like that "B".
-smc
This is a type based on the notes in my sketchbook. Usually I write with a fine Sharpie on thinish paper which absorbs and spreads most of the ink. Hmmmm....I've wanted to use my print on posters before, so this is my attempt to digitalize it.