Maybe introducing some thick/thin contrast?

Less robust, thin, spencerian script, "33"?

That's what I've been thinking lately. I should try it. Thank you

I'm not quite sure about spencerian script for this. It might become more girlish but I'd like to explore the idea.

Thank you

The blockiness of "PUERTO" (especially the U and O) gives it a masculine look, like lettering on a sports uniform.

Hey,

that’s a very nice looking wordmark. Looks quite good so far, but indeed very ‘manly’. The flat top 3 looks also very masculine, aggressive and strong. A thick/thin contrast would be hard to realize —I think— why not making the wordmark a lil bit thinner at all?

Regards,
Florian

Hi thank you for all your comments, I've been working on it. I tried to play with thick/thin contrast and made it a bit wider. I kind of like the results, though there are some thing I'm not quite happy with.

I feel the “T” is not wide enough. Although I like the feel of the “U” and “O”, I'm not sure about the “O” shape. Finally, I haven't figured out the look of the "33" but I'll keep working.

I'm very happy with the feedback provided by this community, I don't know why I hadn't signed in before. You're great guys.

Hey moramedia,

that’s looking good so far, much better than your initial sketch. There is a certain feel of the ‘Prada’ logo, very elegant but not to fancy.

In my opinion the serifs a wee bit too tiny. What about making them bigger, especially the serifs of the ‘T’ stem to small —I think.

Apart from that, keep up the good work!