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Need advice on swimwear logo

ClaudeFran

Hi everyone,

I have been stuck on this one for a while now. I'm making this logo for the swimwear brand (men and women) that I am doing.

I'm not satisfied with the B, and when I look at it all together it just doesnt feel right. I'd like to hear your suggestions and ideas to improve it.

Thanks!

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